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Pose Practice: Lucy by ~hermiethefrog:iconhermiethefrog:

Categories Fan Art > Cartoons/Comics > Traditional > Movies/TV

©2008-2009 ~hermiethefrog
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Artist's Comments

I dunno what to call this pose, really. I was fortunate enough to be given a free magazine with a bunch of manga samples, and one of the things they had was a bunch of poses from Fruit Basket covers. This was one. ...What do I like about this picture? Absolutely nothing! CRAP! Gah! I fail! >_< And yes, I still have the advanced critiques. I know it sucks, I just need you guys to tell me why.

Lucy belongs to Neoyi and Tav. Not me. End of story.

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~Bao-Yu Jun 13, 2008, 6:07:00 PM
I don't think it sucks. 8/ I mean, you got the pose right and it fits the "feel" of the picture. What's wrong with it??
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~JackandDannysGirl Jun 13, 2008, 6:09:28 PM
Aw! The cuteness! ^_^ And it's not total crap! It's better than I could do! -_-

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~hermiethefrog Jun 13, 2008, 6:25:23 PM
I couldn't get the hands, but then again, I never can, and the legs just look off to me. Oh, and I was trying to get her to tilt her head and it just looks like I didn't give her head even sides.

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My name is Alex, I'm a girl, and yes, I'm weird. Thanks for asking.
Obsessions: Danny Phantom, Avatar; the Last Airbender, Harry Potter, Potter Puppet Pals, The Fairly Odd Parents, Degrassi, and Dr Pepper.
Quit looking at me weird! :abduction:
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~hermiethefrog Jun 13, 2008, 6:25:55 PM
Aw! The cuteness!

Her cuteness will swallow you whole! :D

And it's not total crap! It's better than I could do! -_-

Thanks. ^^;

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My name is Alex, I'm a girl, and yes, I'm weird. Thanks for asking.
Obsessions: Danny Phantom, Avatar; the Last Airbender, Harry Potter, Potter Puppet Pals, The Fairly Odd Parents, Degrassi, and Dr Pepper.
Quit looking at me weird! :abduction:
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~Bao-Yu Jun 13, 2008, 6:30:08 PM
No, I can see the head tilt there. Or maybe it's just because that's what she would naturally be doing in this pose and stuff. No, I think it's there. <33
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~hermiethefrog Jun 13, 2008, 6:48:11 PM
No, I can see the head tilt there. Or maybe it's just because that's what she would naturally be doing in this pose and stuff. No, I think it's there. <33

Thanks. ^^;

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My name is Alex, I'm a girl, and yes, I'm weird. Thanks for asking.
Obsessions: Danny Phantom, Avatar; the Last Airbender, Harry Potter, Potter Puppet Pals, The Fairly Odd Parents, Degrassi, and Dr Pepper.
Quit looking at me weird! :abduction:
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~raldski5050 Jun 13, 2008, 10:12:37 PM
Instead of having her hands up higher, maybe they should be in her lap?

Just a suggestion....

ALSO,
try not to bunch her legs on top of each other.

>U< Am I ANY help? :)

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Bye mom I'm going out!!

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Ooh, I'm naked behind a reflector, ooh here's a nip slip.
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~hermiethefrog Jun 13, 2008, 10:17:05 PM
Hm...Good ideas. Thanks! :)

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My name is Alex, I'm a girl, and yes, I'm weird. Thanks for asking.
Obsessions: Danny Phantom, Avatar; the Last Airbender, Harry Potter, Potter Puppet Pals, The Fairly Odd Parents, Degrassi, and Dr Pepper.
Quit looking at me weird! :abduction:
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